Part 1: Introduction and overview

1.  For Openers
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“A novel is a long work in prose with something wrong with it.”

-- Samuel Johnson (paraphrased)

A novel is a sentence ten miles long.

Most writers start with a pretty good idea of what they want their book to be. At some point – maybe 20 pages in, maybe 200 pages in – they realize they're in strange territory: This is not the book they set out to write.

Here's the first of many secrets I'll share with you. This happens to everybody, even people who have written novels for years.

Go back to that ten-mile sentence. If it's ten miles in a perfectly straight line from, say, Los Angeles to Santa Monica, you'll get to Santa Monica beach if you keep that line straight. But let's say you deviate north or south by just a couple of inches early in the trip. From then on, every step you take leads you farther north or south of your destination. At the end of the line, you might wind up virtually anywhere – except Santa Monica.

When you're writing that ten-mile sentence, you make decisions every time you choose a word. You make decisions in every sentence, more in every paragraph, and dozens more on every page. Many of these are going to lead you off that straight line.

The good news is that those wrong turns may well lead you someplace better.

But many people writing a first novel don't know that. They look at this strange landscape they've created, and quit. The sad fact is that much of the time, the book they abandon is better than the one they set out to write. It's like a prospector who goes out looking for iron pyrites, finds gold, and throws it away.

Somewhere in the far reaches of space, I think there may be an imaginary library of all the manuscripts that never emerged fully into the light. There are millions of them. And the melancholy thing is that some of them are brilliant.

If you want to write a novel, or if you’ve already tried to write a novel but never finished it, this section is designed for you. But before you give it your valuable time, you should know there are also some things it’s not about. It’s not about getting an agent. It’s not about being published. When students ask me those questions in the first hour of my course, I always give them the same answer, which is, “First, finish your book.”

This is all about finishing your book.